Dylan McG

[moathibby]

I think it should be looked upon this way.
He played for Hibs.
He plays for Aberdeen.
That's life. Move on.

What a shite poem.

 

[Hibees-Mad]

What a shite poem.

He played for the Hibs.
Now he plays for Aberdeen.
But that's life. Move on


Now it's a shite haiku!

 

[WJC1848]

What a shite poem.

Okay, what about:
I think it should be looked upon this way.
He played for Hibs back in the day.
Now he plays for the sheep.
But that's life. Lose nae sleep.
(Hope your material isn't copyright, Greencol !!)

 

[greencol]

Okay, what about:
I think it should be looked upon this way.
He played for Hibs back in the day.
Now he plays for the sheep.
But that's life. Lose nae sleep.
(Hope your material isn't copyright, Greencol !!)

Copyright?
Is it THAT good?

 

[WJC1848]

[QUOTE="greencol, post: 1683330, member: 374"
Copyright?
Is it THAT good?
[/QUOTE]
Yes, a good example of free verse. Moaty, in one of his many jobs, in this case a poetry critic, which lasted one day, was giving you some hard love to encourage you in future poetry anthologies.

 

[greencol]

[QUOTE="greencol, post: 1683330, member: 374"
Copyright?
Is it THAT good?

Yes, a good example of free verse. Moaty, in one of his many jobs, in this case a poetry critic, which lasted one day, was giving you some hard love to encourage you in future poetry anthologies.
[/QUOTE]
Never really 'got' poetry when I was a youngster.
Still dont get it half a century on....

 

[hibbybilly]

Yes, a good example of free verse. Moaty, in one of his many jobs, in this case a poetry critic, which lasted one day, was giving you some hard love to encourage you in future poetry anthologies.

Never really 'got' poetry when I was a youngster.
Still dont get it half a century on.....
[/QUOTE]
I’m averse tae it tae

 

[Green Sleeves]

He played for the Hibs.
Now he plays for Aberdeen.
But that's life. Move on


Now it's a shite haiku!

Its no the coos he'll be saying hi to soon. Meh.

 

[moathibby]

Okay, what about:
I think it should be looked upon this way.
He played for Hibs back in the day.
Now he plays for the sheep.
But that's life. Lose nae sleep.
(Hope your material isn't copyright, Greencol !!)

at least it rhymes.

 

[moathibby]

DylanMcGeoch
A Scottish Cup Winner
Now plays for the Sheep
So now he's a sinner.

 

[HaarlemShuffler]

I’m averse tae it tae

Youse can a' shove it





Cos ah really love it

 

[The Family]

He hasn’t played since November and no doubt will be sharing the treatment table with Ojo

 

[EA2007]

Failed in league one. He’s done well to get a contract at Aberdeen.

Right time and place when we had him. We’ll both look back and see that was easily his career highlight and his best performances.

I expect better in our midfield this year.

 

[Hibees-Mad]

.

I expect better in our midfield this year.

Ambitious. I like it!

 

[greencol]

Ambitious. I like it!

Ah!
Monostich!
Or.....
Is it a trick and it's a couplet you've written that way in order to confuse the readership of this fine literary publication?

 

[Hibees-Mad]

Ah!
Monostich!
Or....
Is it a trick and it's a couplet you've written that way in order to confuse the readership of this fine literary publication?

???

I'm not saying I had to Google Monostich......

 

[greencol]

???

I'm not saying I had to Google Monostich....

Really?








Me too.....

 

[Hammi]

Tbf a bunch of us thought he was gonna leave us direct to Aberdeen.
This is no surprise.

 

[moathibby]

Tbf a bunch of us thought he was gonna leave us direct to Aberdeen.
This is no surprise.

I think I'll stick to John Cooper Clarke.

 

[Sir Shrink]

I think I'll stick to John Cooper Clarke.

The male version of Pam Ayres.
Never could see the fascination for the guff he churns out.


But there's a new poet on the horizon, well he would be on the horizon if he wasn't in his submarine........

"My new project is writing poetry to myself. I created a whole poem about the history of Lithuania. I'm excited about it."

Mad as a box of frogs. Completely hatstand.